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Laughing Jack x Child! Reader:
~Come Little Children~
Your POV
The sound, a beautiful voice that sang so sweetly pulled the little girl in.
She was hypnotized by the serenade, she followed the harmony through the forest, finally finding and old abandoned amusement park...It was if the world, painted it in black. Stuff teddy bear prizes hanged from their necks by a noose, it sent a shiver down your spine, your attention was snapped back to the song...
"Come little children, I'll take thee away~"
You wondered how, who or what could sing so heavenly...
You found the angelic voice in the ripped and torn abandon big top tent (well it WAS abandon you thought)
You saw a man with black matted hair, with black lips adorned with pearly white razor sharp teeth, his pale white skin looked of porcelain glass, what stuck out most was his spiral nose, he remained you of that Disney movie with the wooden puppet boy! You tried to think of his name when your thoughts were interrupted by a high pitched to low pitch cackling... 
You were frozen on the spot as you seen a pair of white eyes staring at you.
Laughing Jack's POV
"Oh good! Another victim!" The clown thought as he got up and walked over to you, he stop as his claw-like hands cup her face, then says.. "Are you lost?, Why are you sad? Little girls shouldn't be sad.."
He frowned mentally at himself and thought.."What are you doing! Making small talk with a mere mortal child!!" Jack felt something as he looked into her sad horrified eyes,
Love? Was that it? No.. It was protection.. He needed to protect this girl! Even if it kills him...
Your POV
You frowned at the clown then said "I'm looking for my mommy! I got lost an now I'm more lost!" Since you were a child you weren't that skilled at explaining things. "How did you get here then? My little(nickname)?" He said picking you up and holding you. "I heard singing.. It sounded like mommy... But I heard it come from here.." You wave your hands around as if you were trying to grasp the whereabouts where you were.
"What's your name sweetie? And would ya like Uncle Jack to get ya some candy!" He said with a big smile. You tug on your (h/l) (h/c) hair then said " I'm (f/n)" you said softly as you nodded your head at his second question. "What a pretty name! Okay wait here and I'll go get it!" He sat you down on what seem to be his bed and ruffled your (h/c) hair.
You waited patiently until he came back with a bag of candy, you and him equally shared the candy, you insisted on sharing with him, but when tried to say no you would frown, making him say yes making you very happy...

Part 2: Laughing Jack x teenaged! Reader
Coming Soon!
My first creepypasta x reader!
Laughing Jack belongs to creepy pasta
You belong to you!… Part 2
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xNekoChans Mar 26, 2014  New member
That MLP Refrence in the beggining.
Come little children~
I'll take thee away~
Into a land of enchantment~
Come little children~
The time's come to play~
Here in my garden of shadow's~
MellyKeehl Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually it's from the old Disney movie. Hocus Pocus  :D
xNekoChans Mar 27, 2014  New member
Oh, it's been put in a My Little Pony Song "Come little children"
..I never heard of it before, so it makes sense that I didn't know it was the original. :3
MellyKeehl Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's quite alright no one really remembers that movie XD
xNekoChans Apr 7, 2014  New member
Oh, derp xD
Darkening-Skies Mar 20, 2014  New member Student Artist
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deadlyProxie Mar 18, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist

Male!me: juzt.. Juzt ignore her.. Pleaze
iNSaNiTY-I-hAs-IT Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NightWolfLuna19 Feb 18, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
come little children, ill take thee away, into a land of enchantment!
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